I’m assuming if Jeff the killer was real and/or still alive at this point, he would at least be 18-19 years old by today because he was 13 back in 2008 (the original story post).Between 5-6 years in the timeline, his cut wounds heal and reattach themselves back and left him with a huge scar on both sides on his cheeks. His face mostly has scars due to the acidic burns. I don’t think that he was severely burnt since he was in the hospital for a couple of weeks. Presumably, he was a walking inferno for about 5-10 minutes at the party until his parents extinguished him. For his pail skin, I don’t think that skin has the pigmentation of turning into “paper” white when being burned with bleach and alcohol. His skin should just turn to a bright peach/pink color. For his eyes, it is unnatural for him to have pure white zombie eyes. My version consist of him having a slightly cloudy blue eyes to mimic the zombie eye effect. Speaking of his eyelids, “just” burning it sounds a bit illogical because it’s just going to burn the eyelashes off. I thought that if he just cut his eyelids off then cauterize it with a heat source —sound legit? For his hair, his hair should be dark brown and frizzy. I don’t believe that hair color could singe from brown to black. I do believe, however, that hair color would singe to a brighter color at the tips. The reason why I chose dark brown as his hair color is because it’s the color closest to black. I personally don’t like drawing bald people with the exception of Slenderman. So, I have Jeff with most of his hair even though he was burnt but somehow lost a bit. Finally, his hoodie just have brown blood stains and soot. In conclusion, that is how he might look like alongside with the story itself. I have to say for myself that the story sounds lacking, lacking of atmosphere and sense, BUT it does have the “feelings”—in other words, you feel bad about Jeff most of the time and also his family too—.